Aisling-Dono ([info]k155_me) wrote,
  • Mood: depressed

"Rust" - Poem

I'm dedicating this to [info]tiny_5tef since it's her birthday today! ♥ Kinda depressing...

"The sound of your voice shatters me
Like glass against the floor.
The echo of your painful words
Resembles a slamming door.

My tears run like a waterfall
Flooding you with guilt.
The borken sobs that leave my lips;
All that's left of what we built.

So raise your hammer one more time
And grind my heart to dust.
Now all that's left is posionous
And causes blood to rust."


By Aisling Selvakumaran, 19th March 2005

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Working on Ever After as a poem :D :D Done to Ambroise... So just a little lot more to go :D Also doing The Old Times, Family Ties (Anyone remember that one? LOL.. nah i ardly do either! :P) and Forever & Ever!

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  • 6 comments

[info]tiny_5tef

March 19 2005, 23:09:08 UTC 7 years ago

aww, thanks hunny, nice poem :)

[info]k155_me

March 20 2005, 10:13:55 UTC 7 years ago

thanx :D :D

i wasnt aiming for nice, but i'll take what i can get :P :P joke :D *hugs* thanx!

[info]vel_vette

March 19 2005, 23:19:06 UTC 7 years ago

Girl your poems are the best. I could only aspire to write poetry was you do for one so young. Loved it.

[info]k155_me

March 20 2005, 10:17:27 UTC 7 years ago

eaps! thanx u!!! *hugs* means so much to me! thanx!

im sure you cud.. my way is stupid btu it works for me. think of a line that sounds really good, can be about anything... mine was the first line of this poem. and u think of what it themes (broken heart) and u try ad think of other methaphors... (grind my heart to dust) etc... try it, id luv to read what u come up with!!

my mum is and was a really good poet, i get it from her! :D :D i must be pretty good too (either that or my dad is really stupid) coz he thought someone was being attacked buy the hammer! LOL :( i only promote violence in fics! LOL buh bye, i have to write more of my Ever After: the Poem-- why do i over work myself!? damn those plot bunnies! :( cya thanx agen!

*end rammble*

[info]xx_emz_xx

March 21 2005, 16:27:23 UTC 7 years ago

something nice about me

[info]k155_me

March 21 2005, 16:31:43 UTC 7 years ago

i didnt mean literaly :(
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